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This was easily the most aggravating, yet educating page to work on last year. I don’t like my combat to take too long unless it has to, so movement was key to get right here. Also, those colours…
I still have plenty to learn, but this page was a highlight to work on. <3
Isn’t that just peachy. The woman pulls your ass out of the fire, so you just go ahead and threaten her. Better get it together, punk.
@Myk Streja: Has a point. Nathaniel has just seen her take down two gun-weilding thugs in about two heartbeats, and is brandishing a POCKETKNIFE in defense. In no way is the lad thinking things through. ^^
@Spikings: You have nothing to apologize for here. The action was crisp, quick without being rushed, and easy to follow visually. I like your action scenes, and this is easilly one of your best. ^^
Thank you delta! It’s good to know that what I was going for came across well, comments like this one really help me focus in on what I’m doing better, so I really appreciate it! ^_^